Flame Walking Cane Is This A Good Rap I Wrote?

Is this a good rap i wrote? - flame walking cane

Why do people know my real name is Dwayne, because he's stuck in my flow, because my flow is crazy, I go all day with one cent bag and a stick and dressed in purple and my name in the flames, can I do what I want and what I want is what I do, and when I say to walk that $ FUC toooo